A better draft. Well done. You need to cut the song down as a matter of urgency. You also need to think about the pace and variety of shots. It still is a little limited and the meaning is still not clear. What message do you want to give the audience abut your artist and song?
I am currently working on cutting down my song. Once this is done I shall work on re-doing my storyboard if I have time and it doesn't cut into my filming schedule too much.
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